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RamenWarlord
RamenWarlordLv56yr
2018-08-31 10:55

It's shameless of me to 1 star this work but as a reader of WN I'm biased. I feel like this story can be compared to a roller coaster. There might be ups and downs from what I can see but idk. But im hoping it'll be up at most of the times. As a reader I promise to give out the best review I can. Seeing as this is his first serious work as you can see from all his other dropped work. I hope he don't plan to drop this anytime as I can see him have amazing things to do with this novel. This is so sad, Alexa play despacito 7

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kleikai
kleikaiLv12

I just realised you adapted the authors review 😂

RamenWarlord
RamenWarlordLv5

idk what you're talking about i make the best most original reviews out there

kleikai
kleikaiLv12

Of course

LazyReader0
LazyReader0Lv6

Reading ur names made me hungry.

TheGentlemenWorld
TheGentlemenWorldLv10

A LOWLY LVL 7!? Alexa, play Despacito 100

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