OkiFukuro

I like how you write your novel, its like the MC is talking to us readers.... Good job....

Very interesting novel, i hope its get more views...... The vocabulary is splendid... Keep it up bro 👍👍👍

Great novel, its very unique.... Your novel has very great potential

I love that the first chapter already has actions/fight scenes.... This kind of novel is what intrigue me... Great novel 👍👍👍

Very Intriguing, even in the first chapter you can sense the mystery and essence of purpose of the MC.... Great job👍👍 very good novel

A great and Captivating novel.. I enjoy reading this novel .... I'm no expert of writing and criticism or anything but overall i rate 5

Far as i read it's very good, i really like it.... I'm new in writing so I'm not expert on pointing wrongs but all i can say is that it's very good and captivating... Overall i rate this at 5 personally..... Good work dude

Soo much potential .... I like it, its very well written....... I just hope that the latest chapter will be as intense as in like the previous chapters .. Keep it up bro..... Very nive

I may be an unexperienced writer but i can see that your novel have so much potential.... Overall it's very good....

Very good overall.... Its captivating me to read another chapter ... [img=recommend]