Frozen Flame of Dawn

Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.

The story is awesome, it's well written and I can definitely recommend to others👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Alright, it's a good novel that I can suggest to others. The plot is good and interesting, and the characters are well-shaped. As for writing, it's all good, described well, with good grammar that is easy to understand, while reading the words my brain imagines the scene instantly. That's all, nothing says now, so just keep it up! I'll support your novel.

"Prepare to be captivated! This daring new novel brings epic adventures, dark apocalyptic challenges, and a thrilling journey from weakness to unstoppable strength. A masterpiece in the making!"

Enjoyable novel; If you have the opportunity givi it a try. The writing is clear and easy to follow with good descriptions that makes the reading more immersive.

I really love the story and the character interaction. Writing wise is amazing since I didn't find any mistakes. My overall impression is that it's amazing and can't wait to see more

This story thrusts readers into a world transformed by strange spiritual energy that warps nature itself, mutating everything from plants to people. The resulting ecosystem feels alive and dangerous, with new supernatural powers surfacing amid mutated beasts and ruthless factions. Perfect for fans of sci-fi and survival stories, it captures both the awe and terror of a world turned upside down.

The writing is truly captivating. The author crafts a vivid world where you can almost feel the chill of the protagonist’s cryokinetic powers. The characters are well-developed and relatable, making you genuinely care about their journeys. While a few plot points could use a bit more clarity, the mystery surrounding them only deepens your investment in the story. Overall, it's a compelling read that draws you into a rich fantasy world and leaves you eager to uncover its secrets.

Good book..nice plot and lot of potential

A very overwhelming story I love setting and the composure of the writer I highly recommend it for any Reader 💯💯💯💯

Cool book so far! Don’t miss out on the book! The attention to detail is amazing!

Well planned out and written story with more than enough action, compelling storytelling and honestly well thought out characters. Imagine having the fate of the entire human race on your shoulders simply because you're from the future, that's terrifying. I love the background and the power system. Quite unique to have an MC whose a cryokinetic user instead of a pyrokinetic user. Just one nitpick, and that would be the misplacement of the commas and the grammar. Overall tho, 10/10

Good book so far. keep up the good work.

Wow.. okay this story is genuinely incredible at world building. I can say that my horizons have been broadened. the depth of this world and characters will shock you. the amount of love and care put into its creation is admirable. I hope to one day reach this authors level. thanks for sharing I learned a lot.

The story is awesome and well written portraying this post-apocalyptic earth in ways unimaginable. The characters come off just as the author wants them to. I'd like to advice you to read this

The beginning is very captivating as right from the bat, I was thrown in the middle of it. I was very much hooked the moment I learned about what happened to the planet and the way it progressed since then. I can't wait to see how Alex will help bring change to the situation the world lives in. I definitely recommend this novel. I don't think anyone will be disappointed after picking it.

Do here for the time travel concept and the magic element makes it that much better💜💜💜

Incredible story! Writing Quality easy 5 out of 5 - reads like it was written by a professional writer. We also get frequent updates so no need to wait for weeks for another chapter. The story is interesting and it's a popular trope but done in a unique way I haven't seen before yet. The 2 main characters are each very distinct and really funny to see their different ways of approaching things. World is interesting and well fleshed out, though we don't know too much about the broader topics yet since the story is still very fresh.

Right of the bat, the author perfectly blends the post-apocalyptic modern world and fantasy cultivation system. I love that FL is strong and unwavering. The power system could be explained a bit better, but the perfectly detailed fight scenes easily compensate for that. The writing itself is 10/10, I can tell that the author is well written, bringing readers a ritch story. I can already see this as a Netflix series someday. If you are looking for a book that is destined for greatness, this works is definitely for you.

Your expertise has shone through the chapters I've read. The author has created a promising novel, and created a unique style of writing, and this deserves five-star ratings. Keep up the good work Author-san!