I’m no professional myself and I’d say one of my worst writing elements is pacing, I usually think of my next major story development and try to get to it but I’l try to slow it down and develop more minor details :) Thank you for you feedback and support, I appreciate it!

Omg thank you, I don’t like rereading back over since I’l probably just cringe but if lt would improve the story I will try lol Also I’m glad you enjoyed it