Yuisuka
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Just an ordinary human, who love reading novel, and manga, playing a game and watching anime.
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Yuisuka11mthComentado porNice new cover btw
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A puberty statue? I mean liberty xD
The car soon stopped at 130 Bowery Street. Morpheus alighted from the car and gave the keys to the valet. Natasha had already entered his shadow. He looked at the iconic New York landmark and admired its Roman architecture for a few moments, then entered. - Yuisuka11mthComentado por
Thanks for the chapter~
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Where the update?
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She change the viver! Wth cool guy xD.....
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Stumbled when I was searching for a new updated novel. Seem hood, worth trying~
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WAIT!
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Still exposition. Is your world supposed to be that empty? Add more people and create interesting incidents or dialogue. :)
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Adding more dialogue would be good.
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Another tell xX
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To be honest, why you told us about it? You should show rather than tell in the first chapter.
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Okii, soo basically coworker
"I worked at the same company as him too, but not in the same sector I was a nurse at the outpatient clinic, one day he got hurt and went there, and I don't know why, even though I put his finger in place, he kept saying interesting things and funny even with the pain, I confess that I was interested in that and I prolonged the procedure on purpose, he made a face in pain and kept talking, from there I got his number, I don't know if it was because I felt guilty for prolonging it, or because he was nice ." - Yuisuka11mthComentado por
Me? Elvy? Prez? Chad? Din?
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