Myst_10

The reviews here are probably bots.You copied from one piece naruto hunter x hunter etc..Your story is bad.I didnt think there would be incest and there is incest and how u try to make it justifiable is weak and unbelievable.Story is a power fantasy but this is a shiet story.You write this garbage and expect to get a good review.Some of us real people are not brain ded to see ur story with plot holes.Atleast do your research before writing.Some even point out that u are using ai chatgpt now that i have read to ch 90 i see that is true.Fockin learn how to write instead of using chatgpt.You think people who love to read like us wont pick you writing with a bot?

This is a honest review it started pretty good.I read for the harem aspect its purely fiction afterall.Anyway after 300 chapters it kinda derailed.At the start it was thrilling how he trys to save his family.Then when he gets too powerfull it kinda lost colour after 300 chapters.The system is useless and his harem becomes bland.Im not hating it was pretty good early chapters i was gonna rate it 4.5 when i read it upto 45chapter but the more u read it the more bored u get.

For me this is mid.Im sorry rather wanted something like mother of learning this might be like perfect run but i also couldnt get myself to immerse in this story.If i cant get myself to read this then its boring for me i guess

trash clich'e.Copied from cultivation novels,fantasy novels and put in some wannabe mafia thing.Mafias dont work the way you write.Maybe you are catering to a much younger audience but the older the person reading this novel will find loopholes fast and just feel like its garbage.You seem to think peoples mind are one dimensional its more complex than that.Have you not heard of the story about the golden egg laying goose.The farmer kills the golden layin goose to find more gold eggs but it there is none.I dont want to go on a rant i will just stop you can write it the way you want.