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It amazes me that even though there are 1000 stories with the same plot, people keep copying the same plots with the same mistakes (DXD, MHA, ONE PIECE)
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I don't know what the author is thinking but this doesn't make sense, it's basically an extra background that brags about how strong he is and his knowledge from time to time, there is no logic as to why he attracts girls, I don't know if the author ever had contact with women or had a lot of trouble thinking about a relationship.
Well the protagonist is a child who complains about everything and everyone, he can't stand the fact that demons act selfishly and he thinks he is superior to everyone, that is quite embarrassing and well the intelligence of everyone around him will decrease so that the protagonist doesn't I don't look bad.
Typical beginner's problem, makes the protagonist stupidly powerful, the guy can destroy the universe and has all the gods like scared children. But its existence is completely irrelevant and useless, not very logical in its attitude since the fanaticism of the author and the cold and all-powerful personality of its protagonist collide.
These are my personal tastes, don't worry, your story has a good basis, keep it up.
I hate the story that is so far from the original. but there is no system, there is no slave to the system, finally someone uses the powerful races of one piece and a single fruit that's 5 stars
There are many topics that the anime does not touch on because it is shonen, also the interactions of the protagonist with the main cast and the change of characters from class to b, also helping the villains since the only thing that moves them are their traumas. , a little therapy and that's it, they are healthy