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As the author said, it is his first story and it has the problems of a beginner, it is very flat and very powerful, the mc There's no problem with a character being very powerful but it has to be balanced with a flashy personality and the MC doesn't have that.
Reincarnation in DxD with wishes
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I read up to chapter 30 of Hay, I couldn't stand the story anymore, if you're going to change the personality then do a rewrite.
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