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Thank you! First, I want to create a solid foundation for the story. Yes, the protagonist will get involved in the plot, but it may take a little time, as I don't want to create too forced a situation for him to enter the supernatural world. As for his goal, he just wants to have a fun life with no regrets.
the chapters are very short and the story does not make much sense blue lock would not call a defender for a project that is focused on creating the best striker and the mc sincerely as a player but that he is a monster physically and is a good defender that doesn't change the fact that he seems to be made of glass since basically he's just not a professional because he keeps getting hurt a tip for the author if he wanted to write about a defensive player the mc could be a striker and during the blue lock he would turn a defender
honestly the only thing that i was thinking after reading this chapter is those chinese sports stories where the protagonist has the option of playing in the national team he was born in which is stronger better more or levels of that he decides to play in a much better national team weak I know it will be necessary for the mc to participate in the blue lock but if you think about it, it doesn't make much sense for him to leave the base of a club where with the system and his skills it would be relatively easy to become a professional player maybe me I'm exaggerating a bit but I really hate it when that happens in Chinese stories mainly because I'm the son of a Chinese and most of these stories disgust me
Honestly I was enjoying the story even if I found the mc's decisions questionable to say the least and even then I didn't understand why so many people were complaining about the mc but after that chapter I think I honestly understood the story has a lot of potential but the mc's decisions are ciseramete dumb and meaningless since they would have easier and less dangerous solutions I wish you luck with the story but unfortunately it's not my type of story a tip and that you could try to make mc not look like a stupid and innocent child and give him a motivation to want it being a hero I think that would already improve the story a lot