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God bless brother

Well, I really liked the dark vibe of this work, but as you said, I think my problem is with the protagonist and the dialogues in general. When I read them, everything feels very… cartoonish, I guess. The dialogues don’t sound natural; they feel forced. But as I mentioned, I really liked the overall atmosphere of the story. I just couldn’t connect with the dialogues and the protagonist.

said he wouldn't be able to surpass the power? potential of the model, but would it be able to learn, for example, the reverse technique? I think it has more to do with the person than the power of the model itself, right?

Can you tell me if it's Yuri?

I'm in chapter 5 and I wanted to continue, but first I need to make sure, the protagonist is going to be with GIRLS right? because it seems like the author is pushing him (now her) a lot towards Naruto, and I REALLY don't want to see that when the bro is a bro...

The idea is interesting, but the execution leaves much to be desired. To begin with, the relationship between the protagonist and his mother needed to be more developed. The author tried to show that his mother was strict and wanted him to be the best, probably due to something related to the protagonist's father, who left for some reason. Another problem is the fast pace, which causes a lack of details in the events. An example of this is when he awakens his quirk, and his mother says he will start training from Monday to Friday with a teacher, Cementos, a professional hero. There aren’t enough details about why Cementos, being a busy hero, would work as a private trainer. Is it for money? But he’s a hero and should theoretically earn well. In summary, these are problems that could easily be solved if the story had a slower pace to provide more details. These are my main complaints about this work, and because of that, I won’t continue following it.

I smell Artificial Intelligence in this, it's not as pronounced but you can still see the use. Another annoying point is the rabbit following her to the other world, this gets annoying (at least for me)

É nescessário conhecer game of thrones para entender o livro?

This is his sadistic plan: he delivers happiness to us with his incredible works, only to later stop updating and start a new one. Then, he stops updating, releases a few chapters for the first work, and subsequently initiates a third one.

I know it's not similar, but the cursed line always reminds me of the spiritual line from 'the novel extra', what the person says happens in the environment, like 'wind arrows hit you' and that happens, it would be an interesting development path