YourBetrayal

yes it should have been 32 and this last one makes it 33. when he got 3 last time they all went to charm and he had 29

Slyva is a she, right? It keeps bouncing back and forth between he and she.

very good story atm. We got enough details about each character, but they were minimal, and more would have been nice, especially for the side characters. it's developing nicely, and I can't wait for more chapters.

ok, we know what they are, but what do they do?

why does he sleep a 10 min walk from his mother's room lol poor kid

Fast-paced but didn't leave out many details that were too important. however, I hipento learn more about each charecter in more detail.

doesn't say anything about the characters, mc meets a girl, but doesn't say how, and they have the same situation, apparently. story have misplaced chapters and repeated chapters. overall, it seems like the story is very rushed and leaves out way more details than it should.

Yes, definitely a repeated chapter here. I have read this same chapter not long before.

I think some chapters are misplaced or possibly repeated.

I'm getting confused... you haven't really explained much about any of the characters nor how Alex and Maya met and have similar situations. It's like you're rushing too much and leaving out details. hopefully, we will get further into that later.