A really good story and premise. Got me interested right from the beginning. One tiny little gripe I have is that the dialogue in the story has a space before and after each sentence, and it mostly doesn't end in a punctuation. This is just a tiny little problem I faced that doesn't affect the score at all. Overall give this book a try and see if you can vibe with it like I did.

foreign prince perhaps?

wielder?

foreign prince?

better than himself ig

disgusting

siblings in royalty = snakes thatll kill u for the throne

could you help me complete the review swap? you've havent done mine yet

can we do a review swap? im the guy on the forum :D

very well written. I just have one very small gripe with the paragraphing and the dialogue. Like I said in chapter 1 comments, the dialogue not being its own paragraph just made it harder to read. Other than that, its a good read.

good first chapter, just that a lot of the sentences feel too clunky, especially the dialogue. I feel if you have a separate paragraph everytime someone speaks it'll look much cleaner. Just my two cents

I really enjoyed the book so far. Great characters and the writing is top notch too. One small gripe I have is that it gets a little tedious when there is no clear direction of the plot. But that is just the beginning and it fixes itself slowly. But it is still a good read and you should give it a try

so it means no?

slay the dragon rn

sounds alot like writing books

facts

Very interesting premise and good characters. I don't know why but I find emily so cute and funny. I don't really like reading first person tho, but that's just a personal gripe that doesn't affect the story whatsoever. But if you really dislike first person then you should avoid this book.

burn the forest down immediately

bruh

not happy? :(