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Cronos_5124drespondió a wizkiard- Cronos_5126dComentado porChapter 621 : FUCK YOU DANZO!
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I would like you not to tell lies about the work of others, since after seeing your comment I take the trouble of starting to cheer up this other fanfic that you named me and although it has similarities between them only are that the protagonist is a celestial dragon and the one that has achieved Boa Hancock as a slave, but here the similarities end between the two stories since in the other story the protagonista is a reincarnated and has a kind of system, besides that it has dozens much more explicit than in mine, Thank you for reading my fanfics and I hope you won't say it's the same again
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Marcus Mars
Ethan's grandfather, Marcus Mars, one of the Five Elders knowed as Warrior God of Environment, was a figure of formidable influence and unwavering traditionalism. After the death of Ethan's parents, Marcus decided to groom Ethan himself with a little help from the servants with the objective of making Ethan his successor, ensuring that he would one day assume a powerful position within the Celestial Dragons' hierarchy. From the age of six, Ethan was subjected to rigorous training, both academically and physically. Tutors were brought in to teach him the general history of the world, focusing on the period after the Void Century, while Marcus himself educated Ethan about the intricate power structures and families that comprised the Celestial Dragons. - Cronos_5126dComentado por
Stussy
Marcus pondered for a moment before replying. "Stussy would be a strategic choice. She has a unique blend of charm and intelligence, making her an effective negotiator and manipulator. Her influence within CP0 could prove invaluable in navigating the complexities of the World Government." - Cronos_5127dComentado porAlmost 3 years had passed since that fateful visit to the auction house. Now ten years old, Ethan Mars had grown both in stature and wisdom. Standing at 5'1", with striking blue eyes and black hair, he was a serene and somewhat mysterious presence despite his young age; maybe this was because of the way his childhood developed.. His mind was a whirlwind of thoughts as he reflected on what he has done these last 2 and a half years so far..
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Now he is 10 years in the story
Almost 3 years had passed since that fateful visit to the auction house. Now ten years old, Ethan Mars had grown both in stature and wisdom. Standing at 5'1", with striking blue eyes and black hair, he was a serene and somewhat mysterious presence despite his young age; maybe this was because of the way his childhood developed.. His mind was a whirlwind of thoughts as he reflected on what he has done these last 2 and a half years so far.. - Cronos_5128dPublicado por
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Ethan Mars
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Boa Hancock
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The book in progress has a promising plot, although its pace is uneven. The story sometimes moves slowly, which can be discouraging at times. However, these slow moments allow for deeper character development and a richer narrative world. With a better balance between action and description, the fanfic could reach its full potential, I believe. The wait for the development can be rewarding if the quality of the prose and the originality of the story are maintained.