can you point out the mistakes for me @eternal bunny....I would really appreciate it and try to make corrections

i think the concept of the whole thing is lit

the title itself is Captivating, a good introduction that is bound to keep one glued to the story to know what happened next.. The setting of the story is just what most of us need .. it's a ten out ten score for me 🥰🥰😋

when we say a piece of art is fire this is what we mean,it's interesting to the point of addiction... your creativity is something that should be appreciated,I have always loved a story of controversy between darkness and light and I think I found my pie🐝💕💕💕

the story development is lit and you know how best to construct your dialogue .it's a very interesting piece and looking forward to mote of such amazing work

the introductory note takes it all 😊😊I mean all the attention, just reading the synopsis you Long the whole thing, I just love it,you know how to capture the attention of your readers and keep it too

character development, storyline and creativity is top notch. I am falling in love with the book already, you deserve a five star trust me,it's wonderful piece of art

it's wonderful,I rate not as the author but because am captivated by my own work,crazy, right??? But well am so much in love with this book, I'll write then come back to read 😍😍😍😍

I have always been inlove with plots of rich versus the poor and I must say your work is a piece of art .It got me leaving behind everything just to finish reading, give us more💓💓💓

mass release coming soon

I'll have a mass release come on Sunday so stay tuned

the story is Captivating,it addicting the kind of addiction that leaves your attention all glued to it .it's the kind of story I want to read daily.....I love it.

what a wonderful book this is .I have fallen in love with it the instant I added it,good job there and keep it up .I had to stop writing to read the book that's just how captivating it is

it's an amazing work, character development is lit as well as the story outline .it's just sweet and captivating such that you won't want to stop once you stop reading