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Bro stop talking like that’s kinda cringe just say the move
It’s an onix why thunder punch ?
I lover her
Yes please i would love to read it
Yes please
Yes please no people people suck
Yayay i love ows
Yeah I think that’s what the British call it
I hope vaporeon or milotic is her partner
He should’ve answered okay takashi sensei see how he likes it
This is a bit of criticism hope it’s okay if not ignore it i think the chapters are too short and what the mc is doing always takes long so it takes a couple of chapters like learning a move took a couple of chapters a battle with a random trainer shouldn’t take more then a chapter you should focus on either making the chapters longer or covering more then one simple thing and muti task rather then spend the whole chapter on doing one thing