Get mods😂

I’ll give it a read later

That’s good to hear I just hope alchemy doesn’t become irrelevant in the story. So many stories use “crafting slice of life” to draw readers in but within 30 chapters there is hardly any actual crafting involved.

How much of the story is slice of life and focusing on alchemy and how much is action/adventure. I’m always hesitant to start a SoL novel that’s also tagged with A/A because usually the SoL becomes irrelevant quickly.

Not for me. Firstly, the dialogue isn’t the worst I’ve seen but it’s pretty bad. The “children” don’t speak like children and every time the mc talks with someone it always feels forced. Second, there isn’t an academy tag as of this review, but from what I’ve read it seems school life/drama is going to play a major role. Thirdly, there are plenty of small mistakes that can be edited out, however a few major one as well. Like them saying the village was founded a few hundred years ago, then the next chapter saying it one of the oldest villages in the world. At least it’s being updated regularly so 5* for that. Character design is ok? Not really seen much so far. Now for how I personally feel about the story. I was disappointed from what I read. He gets a power where money makes him stronger and it seems like he’s gonna be going down the path of being a hired bodyguard or something along that line. Instead of making a business or being a traveling merchant, which would probably make him 10x more. It just isn’t logical. And I’m guessing as he ages through the story he’s gonna unlock more memories. So considering he’s 10 right now, I’d say he went to school until he is 16, he would probably unlocks memories from his previous that how could use to his advantage when making a business. There is just tons of illogical choices being made while the author is trying to make the mc come off as intelligent and cautious. So it was a huge let down for me. Well good luck with your novel author! Wish you the best!

Tag your story properly please author. You didn’t tag it as an academy story even though it seems school life is now going to be a major part of the story. Anyways I’m gonna have to drop, I have no interest in school drama and reading about young children. Best of luck on your story though.

Although I doubt you’re gonna go the route of making a business of becoming a merchant. Even though with his power that is the most logical path to go down. And with how “dangerous” this world is, there would still be a decent amount of action.

Yep my prediction is seeming more likely. Author if you ever decide to do another version of this story I suggest making the mc an adult, or at least late teens. No one is gonna take some 10 year old serious if he does try doing business deals.

The dialogue is really awkward. It’s probably the worst part of the story so far. Also some plot holes: a few chapters ago you said the village was founded a “few hundred years ago” then she says it’s one of the oldest in the world. I really hope the mc doesn’t stay with them, they said they kids get to choose if they stay or go but he’s being pretty forceful about the mc joining their family. Also if she’s the romantic inerest st that is a horrible decision to have the romantic interest show up so early and at such a young age. Anyways I like the premise but mainly because I thought it would involve crafting and business deals. I personally have no interest in childish drama and I get the feeling there is gonna be tons of it. Just from what I’ve read I’m now expecting the main group to be a bunch of ten year old kids who are gonna “take on the world” or some nonsense. I guess we’ll see though, but unless you have a major time skip to a reasonable age I’m probably gonna drop.

What would be the point? Just for fun?

With the rank Vulcan is at this guy wouldnt last more then a minute or 2.

When’s the next chapter?

No I’m confused how you were even able to post this on webnovel lol.

How? Just how are you able to post this lol?

Lmao you clearly didn’t pay attention, dude is destroying most things he fights.

It’s a gem among pile of trash. I had my personal issues with it, like wanting more kingdom building and less random adventuring. But the author seems to be interconnecting them pretty well, so the adventuring may seem random, yet it actual is part of a larger plan(maybe?). Anyways a great start, can’t wait to read more. Do you have a patreon author?

So he lost 1000 tier 1 golems, just imagine if he had launched 200 over the walls and had them explode, it would’ve leveled most of the fort and killed most of the defenders. Vulcan needs to realize that these lower tier golems are expendable.

Does he realize that he can just launch some golems over the walls and have them explode, causing panic and chaos from the inside.

It won’t let me select the paragraph on mobile but you answered your own question of if you can use alloys. Steel is an alloy. There’s really 2 types of steel, carbon steel which is just iron and carbon (it’s still considered an alloy). Or Alloy Steel (horrible name considering both types are alloys lol) which is iron, carbon and other elements such as magnesium.

Not sure how I feel about this whole “becoming an adventurer” idea. I’m enjoying the story but I really hope we see more kingdom building soon, and of course an enormous mechanical army.