amazing book please continue to update it i love rhe premise pf the work

alright love the story the concept the character and all of that if it is that you are translating please read through and make sure you have the right pronouns and gender for the characters the story is good overall though just fix the gender and pronouns issue it is quite annoying

so the chapter was good I would live for it to be a little long in the chapters in the future please make the fight scenes longer and more detailed more sword play as well he is a master martial artist emphasize that. The overall writing was no good no grammatical mistakes. I just hope for longer chapters with better fight scenes 5 stars

hi I love the story and the concept the writing is amazing the grammar is good so far but you keep on changing the gender of characters and quite frankly that is extremely annoying please fix that

hi this story is absolutely amazing words can't describe how good it is please update the story you have my power stones please update

I love this book but the chapters are extremely short please make them longer

hey please don't drop this book it is amqz8ng please continue it

love it just please do 2 chapters a day I will suppo

hi bro, I love the story. Please post at leat everyday or every other day you have to be consistent to get ranked and more power stones

hi this book is absolutely amazing but could you make the chapters longer as well as updating more often please

hi I really love this fiction just continue to update daily and be consistent please this has the potential to be one of the best one piece fics

hi I really love this story i am asking if you could please update

I love the book. Please be consistent with updates and if you happen to have any writers block, please don't be afraid to ask for help. I want this book to continue for a long time

this is an amazing story and I love it but please update it. has been 18 days now. if you have writer's block just send the mc to a different universe

please continue this story is amazing. I has amazing pacing the plot is good and the character is awesome

love the chapter please continue to update and also please start the back the game of thrones fanfiction with mihawk

hi live the first chapter please make it in the mcu universe

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