dude don't mind but your fanfic is not that appealing. i have read all the martial peak fanfic available but your one is one of the last ranked ones.

bro fix your writing style and punctuations. you can use chatgpt to correct it.

get him su Yan and ning xue first and then pic the most beautiful ones

hey why does your fic is making sato do all the hero work. are you trying to make Naruto and Sasuke side characters.

dude your grammar is horrible. use chatgpt and your misspelling genders all the time

why would you need to watch over him. just could have been a Nobel son of a kingdom and be done with it

nice chapter. but try to improve your writing style and punctuation.

dude make the chapters a bit longer

nice fic. keep up the good work. just make the chapters longer and add at least 2 chapters a day. good luck

dude your fic is hard to read

dude at least post 2 chapter each time.

hey writer why not let Skyler inherit the black family cause Serius cannot inherit the family and other members of the family are dead or wanted.

do it

dude why not keep yang Kai alive. then let the mc take all the benefits and women for himself. You can also make them friends or enemy up to you

keep up the good work

bro keep up the good work. but do a mass release till chapter 30 so the audience can be hooked to your fic

i thought you gave up on this fan fic

bro your chapters are too short 😞

Mr author please do a mass release. The story is interesting but not that much interesting to wait for 1 chapter every 3 days.thank you 👍