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Thank you very much, but it was the only system I found that could be simple for the MC, because I didn't want him to be doing missions all the time, and also, being one of my first stories, I didn't want to complicate it too much, nor copy other types of systems. Thank you very much for reading. :)

Could you explain a little better about the gifts you mentioned. I think I understand, but I still want to have it a little clearer so I can improve it in the following chapters. Thank you very much for reading.

At the beginning of the plot, the strongest person was Ye Ziyun's father, the lord of the city, but this was still black gold, it was not until later that he was able to advance thanks to Nie Li. Likewise, the only person who has reached the level of legend would be Ye Ziyun's grandfather, but he is not in the city. Thank you for reading. :)

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Don't worry, I had the same doubt, so I signed up in his patreon and asked him, there he explained it to me correctly. In addition, I also talked to him about if he was simply going to rewrite the original story with a different point of view, to which he answered that there may be some chapters in which you will see many similarities with respect to the original, as it is necessary for the advancement of certain specific points, but it will not happen very often, because he is trying to create new situations and not just following Arthur, because he has his own things to do the MC.

I read this chapter in the Spanish version, and apparently this paragraph was mistranslated. What he was referring to was that the water attack absorbed his fire attack, as it is for the author himself it would not make sense otherwise, because you have to remember that at this time, the MC is still in black core.

I can't say much, but the first few chapters don't look bad. I just hope the story doesn't fall off in the middle, or start giving away powers to the super OP protagonist at the beginning of the story. I'm really tired of Stories where characters are given the power to manipulate reality and they've only been in their new world for 2 minutes, or they're 3 or 4 years old and already the most powerful on the continent. I will be updating this, to see how the next chapters go in the next week.

Why not? Why don't I, as an author, blatantly leave a 5-star review on my novel? Also, he author is the most beautiful person in the world hahaha

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If possible, continue naming the levels as you did now, because I have read many doupo FFs, and it is a show when translating them, because the names get confused, so I think it is much clearer in the way in which I already said it, also, many people who read the novel or saw the animation should get used to those names.