This is really good heck this might even rival FIRM my number 1 smut story this has everything i like NTR,Incest,Vanilla,heck the whole family has fallen into debauchery mother fucks daughter same goes for Dama(Father) heck right now im on chapter 106 im exci to see the lart where the dama(Father) impregnates one of his daughters we already have sisters wanting to impregnate the other

This is stupid first he comes in with no intention of fighting and now he wants to kill the worm emperor because of the death of some human students that may have caused you must know none of this would happened if he hadn't to the worms territory and this is stupid having a monster mc still have humanity in him i would rather him being neutral or at least not so obviously biased

Tch another human friendly monster novel you would expect a monster mc in a monster novel but no this is basically just human mc in the shape of a snake a big deal breaker for me

Big plot hole over here the seven swords of the mist were made by the first kage of the mist not by some wayward members of the uchiha clan

Stop explaining your novel at the end it irks me

You disgust me

im gonna fall asleep when how you make your words you should do more doing instead of telling

This sucks this system basically spoon feeds the mc like i got no beef with system novels i actually quite liked them but what i hate is when they spoon feed the mc everything and the fact that it can even summon people just irks me even more like dont they ever get curious where they come from how they grew up but no they just existed poof like magic and they don't even question it not to mention they basically have undying loyalty to the mc like their people not undead in conclusion this novel basically sucks with how the system is spoon feeding the mc we could conclude that the mc will never get any character development in the future hays the only good fan fic where the mc actually creates his own ninja village is the novel "village hidden in ice" go read that instead of this trash

“Lord harland” chinese novel so you will have ti translate the name to chinese to search it in chrome “Tree of aeon” pretty famous novel and it will be hard to start reading it because its on amazon and im proud to say i was with it when it was only 20 chapters now it has 290 chapters the journey was good “Black dragon kingdom” basically a black dragon building a kingdom of monsters and trying to defend his gold from his greedy siblings “The god of all people; My god domain is the endless abyss” despite being a chinese novel this is just chef kiss quality he basically created the endless abyss and has a good plot twist at the end too “Winter lord of the white dragon” basically a white dragon that creates his own kingdom “Green dragon scourge” creates a kindom cause hes scared he will be killed by the fish god “Blue dragon Emperor: Lord of thunder” this is a chinese novel basically a blue dragon creating his own kingdom but he is a master of electromagnetism so most dragons mistakes him as a mixed blood of a legendary force dragon I have a red dragon kingdom building novel too but its a terrible one gets too op easily and too dependent on the system

Can i ask whats the chinese raw name of this novel?

I really dont like the gods personality or the way they speak its like talking to his clone i dunno its just the characters they feel unnatural like made from the same mold

Change the heaven from the pure lands there is no heaven in naruto world

Dude you hearing yourself blud only took 2 years to be on the same level of a literal shinobi god

kyahahaha this is hilarious

lol isn't this just era of the gods this is basically plagiarism

You know this could've been good without the countries as it makes it seem like the mc is a saint and makes the other people really nationalist,evil,or greedy not to mention it makes it seem like americans are the only normal one in there which is the mc (jack) which obviously is nationalism and i feel like the other characters here are very shallow or one dimensional i dont really know how to put it in words

Theres no land of rain

It might be fastpaced but i quite enjoyed it

Is the mc evil?

Question does he kill i dont like goody too shoes mc nor do i like evil edge lord mc i would want a neutral gray mc so what is his alignment good,neutral, Or evil? As i dont wanna waste time reading the first 15 chapters only to say this is crap and spend more time finding another novel