he will get a special ability to fully control his pp

Excellent story. Really well thought and you really know how to keep your readers engaged. I, personally, not a big fan of romance genre but this one is so good! I will definitely open the premium chapters or even buy the privilege. You have my attention.

As promised, I'll give you a brutally honest review. No glazing, no sugar-coated words or faked impressions. All I can say after reading your book is: This book is just a Mid. Not so bad yet not so good either. Just so-so. Nevertheless, you really know how to write a hooking lines that kept me engaged with the story. So yeah. that's about it from me.

Truly one of a kind book where Cultivation meet with magic power system. I am currently at chapter 55. Will definitely come back here when the chapters piled up. Like 100ish maybe? Anyway, it's a solid cultivation book, filled with treacherous journey, heart-wrenching plot wist, charavcter development is solid and not rushed.

Revised. I didn't double check the content. I thought I uploaded the fixed chapter. I am sorry for the inconvenience. In the later chapters, MC will have a cold personality.

Hello, there, author. As promised, I'll give you brutally honest review. As I've said in the other day, you need to fix how you write the dialogue but I see no improvement. I mean, why you do you use "<" and ">" to separate the dialogues and paragraphs instead of ("Blas bla, bla.). Your story is good, but ruined by your ignorance to learn the proper writing techniques. good luck.

Thank you! I will do my best to answer your expectations!

Sorry, that bit was a potential spoiler so I have to delete it. No, only the twins will know MC's Golden Finger, especially the system thing. There will be one more Female who has a very close relationship with Peng Lao(Peng Lao's former master) and she will learn MC's real identity and I don't plan there will any other people. And I do think it's purely logical for MC to do this since he want to honor Peng Lao's name and he obliged to let Peng Lao's former master to know his true identity as to honor his legacy. MC will use Peng Lao's name as his second identity for running the business. The courtesans will not learn his true identity because there's no meaning to tell them his true identity when they don't have close relationships with Peng Lao in the first hand.

I never mentioned him having trust issues tho. Cautious, yes, but not a trust issue. Besides, he won't reveal his golden finger to just anyone. I don't quite understand why you seem mad about it. Or perhaps, do you have any suggestions? Before I go too far.

Thank you so much! I appreciate it!

Author's Shameless Review So, what this book is all about? Well, after reading so many books about an MC who starts as a mere mortal human and becomes so overpowered through the whole storyline, it makes me think; how about writing an MC who will teach, train, and nurture his disciples to become immortals? Well, in this case, our MC will “raise” his courtesans to become immortals hehehe…. Iykyk. To save your time, here's the short synopsis. Li Fei, our MC, was a 25-year-old male escort who died after being poisoned by one of his clients despite blind jealousy. He was reincarnated into the body of a brothel owner named Peng Lao. As Peng Lao's memories were assimilated into his mind, Li Fei made his choice to continue Peng Lao's legacy, but as himself, not as Peng Lao. Li Fei didn't mind using Peng Lao's name as his pseudonym or stage name in business-related stuff. However, to those people who Peng Lao holds dear and has a significant relationship with him, Li Fei will introduce himself as someone who possesses Peng Lao's body and tells them that Peng Lao is no longer inside the body. Thus, Li Fei's journey to seek ladies with heaven-defying talents has begun. **** As the title implies, yes, this book is wholesome, slice-of-life, fluffy harem. MC will share intimacy with multiple women, but it's not necessarily for a serious romantic relationship. MC will gather various talented mortal women and each of them has a unique personality, talents, and background story. Some of the ladies will remain in casual relationships, hence their choice to sign themselves as courtesans in his establishment, and a few of them will become MC's official wives after spending some time with MC. Aside from “raising” his courtesans to become immortals, MC will also gradually change the mindset of the people around him that even mortal humans have the same opportunity to become a cultivator through hardship, relentless efforts, and of course, a rightful cultivation path: Divine Yin Yang Unification Art.

ahhh! right! I also noticed why on earth my chapter didn't sync with my docs file! Anyway, I'll reupload the entire chapters from chapter one or maybe revamp the whole book instead since I've edited so many things. Thank you for the heads up!

It will be revealed in the later chapter, which I am currently writing now. happy reading :)

Author's Shameless Review! So, what this book is all about? Well, after reading so many books about an MC who starts as a mere mortal human and becomes overpowered through the whole story makes me think; how about writing an MC who will teach, train, and nurture his disciples to become immortals? Well, in this case, our MC will “raise” his courtesans to become immortals hehehe…. Iykyk. To save your time, here's the short synopsis. Li Fei, our MC, was a 25-year-old male escort who died after being poisoned by one of his clients despite blind jealousy. He was reincarnated into the body of a brothel owner named Peng Lao. As Peng Lao's memories were assimilated into his mind, Li Fei made his choice to continue Peng Lao's legacy, but as himself, not as Peng Lao. Li Fei didn't mind using Peng Lao's name as his pseudonym or stage name in business-related stuff. However, to those people who Peng Lao holds dear and has a significant relationship with him, Li Fei will introduce himself as someone who possesses Peng Lao's body and tells them that Peng Lao is no longer inside the body. Thus, Li Fei's journey to seek ladies with heaven-defying talents has begun. **** As the title implies, yes, this book is a wholesome, slice-of-life, fluffy harem. MC will share intimacy with multiple women, but it's not necessarily for a serious romantic relationship. MC will gather various talented mortal women and each of them has a unique personality, talents, and background story. Some of the ladies will remain in casual relationships, hence their choice to sign themselves as courtesans in his establishment, and a few of them will become MC's official wives after spending some time with MC. Aside from “raising” his courtesans to become immortals, MC will also gradually change the mindset of the people around him that even mortal humans have the same opportunity to become a cultivator through hardship, relentless efforts, and of course, a rightful cultivation path: Divine Yin Yang Unification Art.

No. never. The twins will become the Madames of the establishment and his official wives. He will hire, recruit and invite the ladies that he crossed paths with to become the courtesans in his establishment.

Thank you for your insight, I will take this to reconsider my plot.

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