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Swaggles

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  • Swaggles
    Swaggles1yr
    respondió a daylightmoon123445

    Thanks <3

    Ch 1 The Future
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    The God of Everything
    Fantasía · Swaggles
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  • Swaggles
    Swaggles1yr
    respondió a Juliet_Omuadona

    Sorry for the complications <3

    Ch 2 Monster
    altalt
    The God of Everything
    Fantasía · Swaggles
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  • Swaggles
    Swaggles1yr
    respondió a daylightmoon123445

    My line was thrown back at me xD. Oh, it's fine. I thought it was unreasonable, but if it's only going to be 50 chapters then it's understandable. Unfortunately, all your readers will get the same impression so I think you need to tell them all at once via Writer's Thought, or another way.

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    Let's make history!
    Fantasía · daylightmoon123445
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  • Swaggles
    Swaggles1yr
    Publicado por

    I've read 14 thus far and won't stop there(I'll continue later). So far, I love the mindset of the characters(it really resembles their age). The pacing is good, and there aren't information loads forced. I haven't encountered any critical writing problems. As for the plot, it's good and really soothing to read(it's fixed). The only downfall is the low chapter release rate.

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    The Devil's Prey
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  • Swaggles
    Swaggles1yr
    Comentado por

    Not stupid, plain, and dense characters. This is definitely going to be a good read.

    Ch 1 meeting the Devil
    altalt
    The Devil's Prey
    Ciudad · Juliet_Omuadona
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  • Swaggles
    Swaggles1yr
    Comentado por

    Tragic :(

    "We would when we grow older," the elder sister could not break the little boy's heart. The younger sister did not seem to agree. It could be seen that she felt that her sister should have been more honest. No one knew what it felt like to be dead. But she swallowed the words at the tip of her tongue, seeing the warning gaze her sister was sending her. "Dad is with mum now. They would both be watching over us," the younger sister forced a smile.
    altalt
    The Devil's Prey
    Ciudad · Juliet_Omuadona
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  • Swaggles
    Swaggles1yr
    Publicado por

    I like how the story started off dark and gradually became light, implying the phrase: "There's light at the end of the tunnel." It's a fairly good concept, and very intriguing. The pacing is also good. I can tell the author is taking time to build suspense for the readers. I have nothing to complain about thus far.

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    Home is Here
    Fantasía · KC_writing
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  • Swaggles
    Swaggles1yr
    Publicado por

    Honest review here. The beginning is slow-paced but it helps us grasp a better understanding of the characters and what we can expect. The writing is a bit unique, and the author uses it to his/her advantage(although I have minor issues with it). I love the interactions between the characters. It's a treat for my eyes. The plot is unique, especially the introduction. The only main problem I have is the early locked chapters. Other than that, good job and keep on updating!

    altalt
    Let's make history!
    Fantasía · daylightmoon123445
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  • Swaggles
    Swaggles1yr
    respondió a Couner

    There's romance but not one of the main genres(It's sufficient, though.) The main character have alot of female admirers(love interests) but I wouldn't call it harem because it's one-sided. So, it's a no for harem ^

    Ch 1 The Future
    altalt
    The God of Everything
    Fantasía · Swaggles
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