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Good story,at least now
Good story,at least now
The mc is kushina...............................################################################################################################
Here we have simp mc, wow, wow, I remember reading this novel, but where, author, is this a translation? If not, do you know that what the authors write comes from their heart and mind and is connected to you? So are you a simp too?
Here we have simp mc, wow, wow, I remember reading this novel, but where, author, is this a translation? If not, do you know that what the authors write comes from their heart and mind and is connected to you? So are you a simp too?
A good way to make your novel worse
It seems that you did not watch solo leveling, when he obtained the system and the bloodlust skill, he lost any feelings of pity for the people he killed and does not care about these ridiculous things even at the beginning of the story, so what is happening here and the MC not getting angry is something unnatural and more similar to the silly, innocent characters found in anime.
If he didn't beat them to the point of death, then he's a hero bitch. Don't make him just because they made him go somewhere and become stronger. It will make him hate them less. No, he became punished because of him and not because of them. Make him like Sung Jin Woo, because he's the only realistic person I've seen who's smart and no one will take advantage of him and he's not beta and he won't accept your apology just because you apologized if they did something despicable to him. He's not the person who aims to be a perfect person on the one hand. Morals, not that he does what he wants, but he still maintains a little kindness, which is why I see him as an ideal person in terms of reality.
And make him join them to protect the Earth from criminals and cooperate with them, and they order you??? Of course not, if he is like Sung Jin Woo, who is neither a hero nor a villain, but rather protects the Earth, not to protect the people, but to protect the Earth, and you may say that there is no difference, but there is a difference. Just focus, and Sung Jin Woo is not commanded by anyone.
Oh my god, how amazing! The MC has the intelligence of a turtle, and that’s somehow great. Author, at least give the MC a trait or something to make him worthy of this system. So far, even if you gave it to a child, I feel like they could do better and be smarter. You could say the novel is becoming more and more like Chinese novels, where the MC has no advantage except for the system. (Arthur is better in every way, even though he is in an extremely dangerous world—billions of times more dangerous than Game of Thrones—and he still has courage and intelligence.) Meanwhile, this idiot, who has a system, is afraid in the world of Game of Thrones. If it were The Witcher's world, I would understand.