UrekSenpa1
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The name's UrekSenpa1. Just a writer trying to reach enlightenment through writing. I do hope to achieve it with the help of y'all. ✌️
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usually*
However, the process was agonizingly slow compared to how fast it usual was. - UrekSenpa15mthComentado por
nullb??
When she witnessed him dodge her Emberstorm Bow of the Celestial Phoenix, she was eager to fight him and test just how far she'd gone in her cultivation. - UrekSenpa15mthComentado porCh 1 Summoned As A Hero But Reborn As An Ant
- UrekSenpa15mthComentado porCh 1 1. Prologue
- UrekSenpa15mthComentado porCh 1 Weird Creature (1): Pursuit of the Weird Creature!
- UrekSenpa16mthComentado porCh 5 Gate way teleportation
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Theirs
At this point, I can now tweak thiers just as much as I could tweak my own, but as I always say, - UrekSenpa16mthComentado por
Jeanne or Jeenne??
"Jeanne." - UrekSenpa16mthComentado por
Just now now you've messed with her name...
Instantly, I felt a huge drain of mana that left my body, simultaneously, Jeenne was already evolving. - UrekSenpa16mthComentado porRemainds me of that one porno I watched, where the man was about to stick his small junk inside the girl's inner gates, and suddenly started crying when he heard her moan.
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When instead of and
Even when I'm asleep, she's sitting right there, and only ever leaves and she sees I'm waking up. - UrekSenpa16mthComentado por
One "worse" should do
A few days passed and the situation only got worse and worse every time. - UrekSenpa16mthComentado por
Consider changing "As I am now" to "right now" or "at the moment"
As I am now, I can never fall sick, hell, if need be, I can tweak my magic circuits just enough to expand my life force even more. - UrekSenpa16mthComentado por
Wield*
A truly perfect way to prove I am the main character of this narrative. A power only I can weild. - UrekSenpa16mthComentado por
Hence, the vision(.) Not (,)
Once you have your magic type, there is only so much you can do with it, hence, the visions, these gods bless you with their visions, granting some kind of foresight and wisdom, to expand the use of your magic, some are even able to wield 2 or more magic type, depending on the person. - UrekSenpa16mthComentado por
blue eyes, dressed in a maid outfit was looking...
Standing at the entrance of the room where I was, a small girl, with blonde hair, beautiful blue eyes and was dressed in a maid outfit was looking directly at me. - UrekSenpa16mthComentado por
"Fell on me" would sound better
The truck tipped off the road and fell on my body, the sound of my bones crushing from the impact reverberated in my ears. - UrekSenpa16mthComentado por
(.)
No, I need more - UrekSenpa16mthComentado por
Would all be snuffed out*
The hype I had been building up for months, after people referred to me as "He" or "Him" would all snuffed out in a second.