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Very good translation and the history its very fun as well, i saw the original and i can say that the autor put some word to make the history less chinese. 10/10

Maybe is a translation thing, in japanese some words have female and male gender

The author deleted my previous comment, but this fanfic is full of plot holes and gets worse and worse as time goes on. XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

The beginning was very good, but then the story was rushed and not developed. I was hoping that the protagonist would stay on the dark continent for a long time, apart from the fact that power scaling doesn't make sense with the protagonist surviving characters much stronger than him, but the worst part is the academy arc, people can learn on their own, the difference in power between the students should be absurd since some would be slightly stronger than normal humans and others would be god since they are in the multiverse and it doesn't make any sense NOBODY has the ability to check the strength of others and the protagonist deceives people with shallow lies, and the protagonist decides to act weakly with a stupid reason. This fanfic had a lot of potential, but it is extremely disappointing

It would be very interesting If The MC cultivates The moon Path as a secondary Path and create a new Path combining the moon Path and shadow Path, like night Path or reflexive Path

I also thought of an interesting killer move idea, it consists of sending a shadow projectile at the enemy, making the shadow of the projectile real, then making the shadow of the projectile's shadow materialize as well, multiplying the attack while they all have the same strength.

I had an idea for a killer move, it's not really a killer move but I see defensive potential in ranks 1, 2 and 3. It consists of 3 gu, light sphere gu, metal sphere gu and shadow sphere gu. The light barrier will be in front and the metal one in the middle, both the cover and the light will serve to "strengthen" the shadows, creating a very strong barrier

saying a good old kys to EI is the solution to this dilemma

Ideas for gu: 1. Poisonous gas gu - Self-explanatory effect, it would be refined by bringing together several toxic gases 2. Poisonous dead blood gu - Poison that causes decomposition in the affected person, it would be refined by inserting poison into living beings, killing them and extracting the poisonous blood from their bodies and repeat this process repeatedly 3. Dissolving gu bodies - These would be a liquid that would melt the body on contact, the refinement method would be to dissolve living beings in poison. I thought of a very basic killer move that would be to combine a needle gu with a venous gu

life after death is canonical in Naruto, Takuma should have a totally different view of death, after all he is absolutely sure of life after death, not to mention that he himself has a second life