Malex_999

You waste a lot on explanations idk why but seems excessive

Please don’t have broken be a whimp

Hate the Leon chapters make those shorter and make the broken chapters longer since your going to keep doing both which is annoying it’s what people hate about assassins creed the out of game parts no one cares about or likes but you do you author please let readers know which chapters are which bc I don’t want to read about Leon the book is called broken not Leon

Leon chapters are stupid and time consuming I hate them please let us know when you switch

Only Intrested in game world his real life is boring

Bored 🥱

The chapters that happen outside the game are boring. I’m hoping there’s not a lot of these in the future. I hope it’s more just in the game chapters.

Good chapter brother author keep up the awesome work I love the book it’s very original and captivating can’t wait to read more

Another good chapter thanks author

The book is great and I love the story in originality. It has a nice flow. Can’t wait to read more. You’re doing a great job author