Writing Quality is good, just add more monologues then it would be perfect. Update Stability has improved, compared to your last novel :). Story development until chapter 10 could be a little slower. Example write more about the trial, personally I think it was a bit fast but that’s just me. Character design is good. World background so far so good. The depth realm is well explained. He also has some unique powers which I have never seen before. But don’t make them too Op, because then it will get boring. I see you put some restrictions on his abilities which is good. I’m looking forward for future chapters:)

Nice chapter

Sad that you stopped writing the other novel. Though this one looks promising. Keep up :)

Wait fr?

They will probably get exposed in the test for the sword sect thingy

Not the captain. Anyone else is completely fine but not the captain

It has been like this since chapter 1

So slow upload time

Author is writing for his father surgery or something like that, I’ve read it Bedford somewhere. So I don’t think it’s gonna end soon. Things that we miss: -Who Ashlyn really is. -Backstory of Ashlyn. -The higher worlds -Titans -Somewhere in the novel it said that tyrants is just mid level strength in the higher worlds, so it’s a lot of ranks left. - Even those top from higher worlds is just a weakling to titans.

I think it’s a lot left. Even the higher worlds are just small things for titans

Very very soon. It’s just one final boss fight left

But we both know he won’t get anything. Author want the mc to be as self sustainable as possible, not taking help from outsiders. Thought is irritating we can’t do anything about it.

:(, they should have given michal stuff back.

Nope, it’s given a lot of hints. Upper worlds, there was a time he met a clone of a girl, and there she said to herself “I need to contact my original self in the upper world, so when he ascends we will be the first to recruit him.” Something like that

Hope they give Michael something back which will help them. I mean he gave a lot of stuff to them and even emptied 80% of resources which he planted which was enough for people to level up for centuries

😭

Si

Here comes the power

I’m sad for her

I’ve read until chapter the recen chapter which is chapter 8. The writing quality is very good, almost no writing mistakes. Although a slow story development as I can see it’s good. Updating stability is decent, 2-3 chapters daily Story development is also good. I’m not good at writing review so Im just writing what I think. I think it’s unique, ehh the start I mean. Also for the future the world background would be be eh big considering what would happend. Character design is good: his character is till in development, still young but yeah it’s ok.