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They've been dating for 2 years apparently, so it's not really the beginning steps.
Fanfiction still has to follow the rules of the world it's in, at least as far as common sense goes, and as far as we know, Harems aren't common
If you don't like ntr, this ain't for you.For some reason, Mc heavily pushes for his 'girls' to sleep with male versions of their species. It's really weird and creepy, to the point that it seems like he's begging them to do it, leading me to believe he has some sort of fetish.This could've been so much better had the author not included the ntr shit, and the Mc begging for his 'women' to sleep with other 'men'
No, it's not.Surrogate would mean getting another Gardevoir to carry a child on their behalf.
No it doesn't.The government are scum, they would've tried it on some prisoners or something with low level fruit.
No, it's not.He can farm items and not have to use his own money to do it. It'll also help his girls get stronger, or he can sell the items that he feels is useless for probably a lot of money given what they do.
He does.It would've been better for him to keep the 650 and hunt pirates. He'd have more money right now.But in the long run, casinos would pay off better.
No, a lot of these authors think that smoking somehow makes your character cooler.
The MC is more of a side character than an MC.Spoiler Alert!!!He simps hard for Bella, and if what another comment says is true, he actually ends up getting rejected by her for Edward. It's well written grammer wise, but the story itself is not that great.
He made the MC one of those side characters that simps for the main girl but loses to the protagonist🤣Wow, why would anyone write a fan fiction like this?
agreed, dunno why people are so obsessed with her.
even if he falls, he doesn't take fall damage, so why is he even scared? Guess he just wants to be closer to her.
Her comment isn't wrong, though.An unmarried woman and an unmarried man shouldn't be in such close proximity, at least during those times.
That's because he became good out of nowhere, with Tristan's build, no ones messing with him.
That's actually normal.Most people would avoid the other person in that situation, especially if they don't like them back in that way, or they'll ignore the other person's feelings for them and pretend everything is normal.But I've stopped hanging out with a girl after I found out she had feelings for me, because I felt like being around me would just cause her pain, which it did, or at least that's what she told me.
No, how about following his first thought and taking her to the love hotel.
They can bring them back dead, doubt they'll care whether they're dead or alive in this world.
Can't disagree with you there.I'd probably fanboy too, but definitely not to this level.