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The story got me really hooked, its really funny and interesting. MC as well as the other characters are really likable. Negatives- Grammar, and the description gets short. -------------------------------- I really feel your story has a great potential, grammar and good descriptions are something that could get better with practice. I am really looking forward for your future work. -----KEEP WRITING----