Review and add some thoughts to my story thank you.

Yeah my first novel. Wanna shoot something big and I'm sure I will. The world in my novel is full of mysteries, buckle up for some wild power systems (yes more than one). My posting will be inconsistent cause I'm in high school. So dear readers if you love the story please support it.

sorry for making it boring. if I got more comments like this then I'll definitely change my writing. THANKYOU