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Well, I withdraw my objection to him being incarnated. I liked what you described
The main reason is that I haven't seen any author who has done this successfully and made it enjoyable for the reader. Whoever does this makes the second incarnate stronger than the mc or smarter than the mc, and they are always distinct from the mc, which erases the uniqueness of the mc, and this in itself is annoying to the reader, but if you are sure... by making it interesting for the readers, you have the freedom to do what you want
please no
wait ,what the hell
I will not say that the novel is enjoyable, and I will not say that it is boring. It is in the middle for me, but it can certainly be better if more conversations were introduced between the characters and social interactions. The chapters so far are almost an internal monologue with only increasing strength.
It's a translation from a Chinese novel, the Chinese are the ones who complained