Mamdouh_mohamed

Nice novel so far, but you know that the last island is still unknown and its content is also unknown. What will you do about that?.....................

Damn bro

Yeah

Hmm, you can write the name and condition of the person who said the sentence when you write from a certain point of view for example (How did he become so strong so quickly? Kim Hosoo thought as he looked at Meliodas as he left the fighting ring in doubt and confusion) or (There is something wrong with this mana that makes me shiver as if death is breathing in my neck. Kim Hosoo said to Shin Jonghak as he stared at Meliodas without expression)

Hmm, can you write from the point of view for example (Meliodas' point of view) or (third point of view) Writing the name followed by two dots on top of each other and then a sentence is annoying and ruins the immersion (a good and interesting start especially since there are no fanfic for Novel's Extra. I encourage you to continue)

The author is stupid or what, he thought everyone was like Kakashi, Itachi, Naruto and Sasuke, a chunin at the age of 18 is considered talented, especially since all the jonin we saw in the series are almost over 27 at least, the one who is not considered talented is the one who remains a genin his entire life or reaches the level of chunin in his late twenties and the one who reaches chunin in his early twenties is considered normal and before twenty is talented, if according to the author, chunin who are 18 are not talented, then the jonin will be many like leaves from a tree, not a small number, they will be the foundation of the village

peak

Does anyone know where I can read the original?.............................................................................................................

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