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you won't find a better fantasy thriller novel the narration is good the story is captivating and can easily understood few things were messing up the story but the writer fixed those so overall a good read nice work author

I loved the concept of body swap, the story was interesting the narration was strong and captivating there were not any kind of grammatical errors in the first few chapters so all I can say good work author

the story was interesting, I loved the MC the fun was accurately poured into the story but there were grammatical and punctuation errors which I guess author has improved in further chapters Great work author

the author has done an amazing work on this one the story was convincing the characters were unique there were just few grammatical errors in the first chapter but as the story proceeded they were no where to be found good work author

I loved the way of things , the narration is smooth I loved the way writter has shown stressful life of a normal person in ch 1 there were few negligible punctuation errors but that did made any affect to the story Good work author

I loved the MC, the story was unique and mysterious, there were plenty of things that will keep the reader pushing for further chapters there was a negligible amount of error that was good author you're doing great

I've always been a fan of thrillers and this one hits the spot. I loved the storyline, the mc was deep,the writing was easily understandable. There were just few punctuation errors but they didn't affect the story much, So good work author

Your work was really wholesome the story and the idea was hooking I loved the way you explained every little thing and there were few punctuation errors just fix them and it's beyond perfect Good work author

there are punctuation errors too look into it too bro

I'll mark those in paragraph comments delete them after you read those