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The Bloody Angel

Autor: listen_moon
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"Princess plz spare my life and I will tell you each and every........".He begged but this princess or should I say 'crown princess ' was not giving a sh*t about it. Slash, slash, slash "Dear king father, I am sorry but I am left with no choice ". She wiped off blood from her sword and eyelids as she killed them with her eyes closed. --------------------------------------_------------------------------------------ If your thinking that it's a typical love story with a Prince Charming and pretty princess, then dear you're wrong. A story with a savage princess who hates herself and egoistic werewolf Alpha. One is "The Bloody Angel " while the other is "silver wolf ".Both against destiny . But let's see how universe is gonna play with them!! What was witnessed by three year old, Dazel that made her hate herself????? **Cover page is not mine. Credits to the owner **. Am a newbie so what are you guys doing?? "support me" Kidding plz review and leave comments. Um, guys a few ch were like appearing off ,so I have updated those plz enjoy and comment.

Chapter 1Princess Savage

Kingdom of Alopia land gifted with each and every season, a humble and honest king with his beloved wife. Two mysterious princesses with an 'innocent crown princess'. But with a lot politics and conspiracies.

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Capturing techniques over other kingdoms were being discussed under the leadership of a pair of smokey eyes of black iris. "Oh, Alpha of werewolves, seems like your tired of living. Let me help you to clear your existence from this world "in a sarcastic tone. "Your playing hide and seek with me? "Alpha exclaimed and chuckled. Kezia took the sword out of it's shield and pointed it's edge on his Adam 's apple.

"since, you have that much dedication, then let me narrate a story "Kezia said with bright eyes.

-----------------------------That story ----------------------------

Once upon a time there was a beautiful kingdom named Alopia. Thorn was the king with his beloved wife queen Maria .With three princesses Bella, Steve and Dazel. Bella and Steve were twins as Dazel was two years younger than them.

A lemon fresh sunny day with sunflowers and Marigolds covered the whole palace surroundings with their yellow glow. Matters of courts were being discussed.Suddenly three beautiful angels entered the court playing and running around. Being able to capture their beautiful aura was a golden opportunity to witness colourful butterflies flocking their wings around by spreading magical dust in the surroundings. Three chubby white babies running around in pastel coloured clothes.

"Wait for me, I.. I will get you now " a cute soft voice came

"then come" the twins laughed.

"Stop " the cute baby shouted ,

even shouting was appearing a blessing . King and Queen were excited and were laughing. The ministers were staring like they were hypnotized.

"I will give you chocolates " the twins were surprised .

They walked towards Dazel but were seized by her

"Now I have caught the thief, you will go to prison now ".

Everyone burst out into laughter,'these kids'. Dazel noticed the attention on her and pouted in embarrassment. Her pouted lips of maroon and white bunny front teeth were enough to feel butterflies in the stomach.

The king stood up, hugged Dazel "oh, my cutie rabbit ".

Bella pouted "Are we not rabbits? "

Queen hugged Bella and Steve "oh, you guys are our mischievous mice ".

Once again the tensed environment took place of giggles and chuckles.

Minister Cavour started " My Lord, now it's time for us to select 'the crown princess as further training should be started ".

King nodded in agreement.

Queen interrupted "your majesty, it doesn't matter who will be 'the crown princess ' but I will make sure to shower equal love to all my cuties" with a smile but the problem was eating up from inside.

King asked "Any criteria for making the decision?? "

It was Minister Trek "your majesty, crown princess will not be only a ruler but also a worrioress so..... "

king asked "so? "

Minister Trek replied "your majesty, we should give princesses a night out alone and watch their performance".

Nobody knew that how the fu*k ,that horrible idea came in this minister's head but it was a ritual. "The sacred Ritual ".

"On that we can select 'the crown princess '.Trek finished and smirked.

King was about to reject the proposal but queen grabbed his fist and squeezed it lightly with an expression of 'it's alright ' but it was 'not' fine at all !!!!! Just a matter of time and the queen was opposing that decision.

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4

The story potential is high. The narration is splendid, the pacing and character designs are outstanding. World building is well thought, though the only problem is you need to roughly edit the Chaps. Dialogues are sometimes not starting with capital letters. The punctuations are misused and there are unnecessary spacings sometimes. Making me to pity the story as the potential is great. Write more and don't be discouraged, I know you will improve in one or two years time. Here's five stars to brighten up your mood. ✨

3yr

ArnolDadi
ArnolDadiLv3

Revela spoiler

3yr
Chad_Ashford
Chad_AshfordLv1

The plot is great all around, far better then my moronic novel. The only problem is the spelling mistakes that should not exist at all. Btw, advice from a fellow author. I suggest you begin releasing 3 chapters a day each 4 hours apart. That's how you draw readers. That's how I got about 2k readers in only 2 days. Lots of people love to check the update section of a genre.

3yr
listen_moon
listen_moonAutor

Author here guys, I have figured out lack of proper punctuation, grammatical errors and rushed dialogues. Will give my best to give error less work. Thanks

3yr
Ultimatedaywriter
UltimatedaywriterLv4

Revela spoiler

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ghjgyugf
ghjgyugfLv1

you won't find a better fantasy thriller novel the narration is good the story is captivating and can easily understood few things were messing up the story but the writer fixed those so overall a good read nice work author

3yr
Knossos
KnossosLv4

Writing quality brings this novel low. OP really needs to go over his writing with a spell check. Please, this would help make the novel look better. The description is a bit sleazy, but that's okay. Keep up the good work.

3yr
Ariel_x
Ariel_xLv3

Interestingly, this is not out normal princess and the beast kind of romance. It is a new picture of romance entirely that will give you chills. It is a very intriguing novel that I will recommend to everyone. Please do add to your respected libraries. Thank you!

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geewintG
geewintGLv1

The story has potential. Armed with great world background and story progression, it will draw in readers, however, I did come across mishaps in the first few chapters. It includes the need of proper punctuation and was lacking spaces in areas, but it can be done with editing. Readers can try it out. Great job, author.

3yr
guyfawkes
guyfawkesLv1

There's a lot I liked about this novel. The character descriptions are vivid. This novelist has a real ability to make you "feel" what the characters are experiencing. I thought the plot was entertaining and well-paced as well. The only point off would be in some of the grammar and spelling early on. But for me, that didn't make me enjoy the story any less.

3yr
chimychimes
chimychimesLv11

quite nice I must say, you got a way with words.* whisper* the bloody angel. that really sent a chilling sensation down my spine, not forgetting the synopsis. the alphas are here...

3yr
kuhaku_sora
kuhaku_soraLv3

The concept is one of the classics. It includes things such as coronations, royalty settings, and more! I really am a fan of those things (somewhat), and i do love your book~ There are some points that I'd like to point out. In making dialogue, it would be better if you could make the proper commans and periods for the conversations for example. "I want to be the Queen of the Lakes and Dolphins. I want a handsome king, just like you, daddy!" Bella smiled. Bella and Steve pointed towards the Queen's crown with glee. "I want that one." Steve told, "Your crows is so heavy, deaddy. I don't want it!" The king nodded, "Yes, dear." Some of the dialogues here a bit mixed and matched, so try implementing the tips I gave you and from the internet. Kudos for the author!

3yr
TitanMaster
TitanMasterLv1

This is definitely an entertaining read for fantasy nerds like myself. the world itself is enticing and the story makes you not want to stop.

3yr
hansora
hansoraLv14

The idea of a ruthless princess is good. I think you should focus more on how you write and the way you plot the story. Try to read the books that you found comfortable and interesting then learn from how the authors wrote their books. Those are what I've always done to improve my writing. It takes time but practice makes perfect!

3yr
SilverNexusPendrag
SilverNexusPendragLv13

The idea and premise of the story is a great one. The idea of a kingdom having such a ritual in order to choose a crown prince/princess is in many way like those in old Norse or even that of Rome where only the act of suffering can one become strong enough to lead. However I only have one thing negative to say and that is the story is moving too fast as it feels like its on fast forward,

3yr
swarnadeepsaha2005
swarnadeepsaha2005Lv1

Pretty good I should say. The plot is good and the writing quality is also good. I love this kinds of stories. I can see the authors passion from reading it.

3yr
Jo_J
Jo_JLv13

A very sweet cover page! The synopsis is intriguing and makes me curious about the content of your story. I like the way you use the typical classic novel scheme and mix it with other ideas. The plot is interesting. Well done! Good luck with the contest!

3yr
fifyfd
fifyfdLv1

the writer has done awesome work, the story and narration both at their best, the chapter has a few grammatical mistakes but it doesn't make any big effect on the story that are been improved in the further chapters good work author

3yr
Cloudthief
CloudthiefLv1

It's a beyond interesting concept with good world-building, characters, and story-development. Only problem I have is the quality of the writing. The vocabulary is great, It's just the diction which doesn't poke me right. If the author fixes those small mistakes then I bet this story could become a great one! All the best luck to your author!

3yr
ghjgyugf
ghjgyugfLv1

one of the best political thriller and fantasy mix you can find on the whole webnovel app the writing is easy the story hooks from the start it's a must read

3yr

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