The writing quality is top notch in this one. The way the author describes things makes me feel as if I'm the one experiencing them. The Style of writing is beautiful and the story itself is touching and heartwarming. I look forward to seeing more of it.

The writing quality is exceptional and the story progresses at a smooth pace which is to my liking, the world building is also done well. The main character is intriguing and the side characters feel as if they are actual people. Highly recommend this one.

The author has created an engaging immersive world with interesting characters that leaves one hungry for more content. The writing style is really good and clear and the pacing is normal making the story easy to follow. Highly recommend this series to those who enjoy Chinese novels.

The writing style really captures you, it gives an almost mystical feel that works well with the plot. The plot itself is interesting and immediately has you intrigued and the character interactions are well done. The world is described in a detailed way which makes seem tangible. The author is doing an incredible job and I would highly recommend this work. Will follow and read this one for sure.

i like the writing style, it reminds me of many classic authors that write in this manner

The beginning pulls you in and makes you feel exactly what the characters are feeling. The writing style is incredibly rich, though there are some grammatical errors, it's not to the point that it ruins the reading experience. Highly recommend this and can't wait to see where it goes.

I really like this work as a fan of the isekai genre. The MC's emotions are depicted in a believable manner and the relationship with his family is wholesome. it's a fun read that I highly recommend

Ayo what is bro doing😭 get the FBI here

The story has an intriguing relatable main character that is tangible and the description of the world is top notch. The character interactions were really enjoyable and i had fun reading them. I can't wait to see how the story progresses.

Alright this book is interesting. The main character is intriguing and the overall plot is very interesting. The character interactions are enjoyable making the book a fun read. The writing quality is not the best but the story gets across to the reader. This story has great potential and I hope the author continue this interesting work.😁

The system tripping frfr🤣🤣🤣

They finna really killed my bro for finding an item😭

"Already waiting there was all her relatives" since there were many individuals waiting for her try writing "Already waiting there were all her relatives"

"Told" would be better if you used tell like "did I not tell you" since the convo is happening in the present for them

"She does not resemble other little girls" Try changing it to "She was unlike other little girls"

I would recommend changing Sat to Sit on his lap And taught to teach

"the master who was still do not wish" I think It would have made more sense to say "the master who does not wish for the miss to marry"

"whom she met and fell in love WITH" That would make for easier reading

The character descriptions are good and the tone of a traditional Chinese novel can be felt in the writing. The story has some grammatical errors but the overall reading experience was good, especially the wholesome moments at the beginning.

That switched up from cute to deadly real quick. The story was really intriguing though they were some grammatical errors but that can be fixed. It's really good work otherwise.