Yes!

I think you're making Alex too powerful. If he could locate all enemies, he would be unable to defeat

Exactly what I thought, UI mean I expects him to be more techno related or even Asgardian related, I mean, he's a gamer right

Nice setting, the plot is good and the story keeps me going

you have a great character development,I love the Henry Walton character

interesting chapter,you did a good job