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So webnovel or the author set back the open chapters and isn’t continued to update for several days, but is opening previously “opened chapters.” I used a purchase privilege to purchase the next chapter, but it sent me back 20 or 30 chapters to open chapters for which I had already paid.
Also, Feng Wu was so loyal to the Junwu Empire and all of her family and friends—its not believable that she would just leave like that. Also, Master Mu was some sort of ancient figure in the beginning, and now he’s the brother of a current emperor? Her mother woke up and seemed more lucid after getting Lou Zilin’s medicine, but there was no follow up conversation with Feng Wu or any restoration of her cultivation to bring her back into the story at the end.
So I’ve probably enjoyed this story the most over a long time. Thanks for writing a fun and humorous tale! I do wish you had shown us what happened to Feng Wu’s mother and brother and had a little more closure—like the reactions of all the main supporting characters to Jun Linyuan’s identity—really should be addressed, though I presume you’ve had enough of the story and don’t wish to go back—on the other hand, you’ve invested so much time into writing the story, it would be worth it to finish as well as you started. If you ever update to complete those circles, I would like to notified.