I liked some of it, but just rewrite the Lotm chapters instead of simply copy pasting, and have the main charecter be part of the plot.

This is fucking amazing love your story. Honestly this was one of my favorite lord of the mysteries fanfic of all time. The thoughts on anchors is really profound and I like the being your own anchor thing.

Sorry man but how do you get every name wrong? Xio not Hugh, Fors not Fols. Like legitimately everything else.

I really like your story but their is one thing that is absolutely killing me. You have misnamed one of the protagonists, you have been calling Xio Derecha, Hugh when that's just not her name.

Just wanted to say the names Xio not Hugh

Really glad you ended your hiatus, love this story

How long till the next chapter? Love your story too.

He'd dude you keep calling Fury Zho Chang

You skipped a chapter

It's back!!! Praise the seven spots on that one ladybug, it is clearly the reason 🙏

The best chatgroup novel I've ever read, a bit angsty but the charecters change and grow. The story's great, kinda hate how much he likes lilly, but that had a nice end. Overall great fanfic author! Maybe upload it to Ao3 you'd probably get a better reception for the angst fluff stuff.

That's so true!!!

Just want to remind you if you copy the document into Google docs you can. Batch replace words with others, ie Darth Vader = Tashigi, it's simple. Something like control h.

I think the phrase means, he doesn't want to spend time talking with her, like how long it takes to cook a pot of rice.

I think you might be forgetting , before he got the children disowned they ambushed him, beat him with sticks, threatened to cripple his hands so he could never be a mage, knock a tooth out. He never hurt himself, all the injuries that had them disowned were caused by the children's that got disowned.

. . . Dude, we're on like chapter 25

The Kurama clan from naruto

Dude you should have made him Obito's big brother

The main charecter has his head so far up his ass he's seeing 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈 🌈

I mean. . . Can you blame him?