Celestial_Pages

I had the same reaction 😂

I really connected with the spark of Chapter 1, but by Chapter 4 I found myself losing that initial momentum. I’m not vibing with the direction this chapter took, though I appreciate your effort and creativity. Wishing you all the best as you continue refining your story!

Good first chapter 😌

TFTC!

This sentence needs editing,it needs to be pawn instead of paw.

same 😅

You just saved me so much time

fucking beautiful chapter 😭

tftc

I really enjoyed this novel overall. Although the beginning was slow and a bit hard to get through, it’s clear how much the author has grown as a writer since then. Once the action started, the pacing improved significantly, and I had an absolute blast reading it. The R-18 scenes were well-executed and contributed to the story's appeal. To the author: I’m really looking forward to future chapters! I’m especially excited to see more of the world you’ve built—different continents, and maybe even other worlds, if you have that in mind for future chapters. It’s amazing to see your growth as a writer, and I’m excited to follow your journey as an author. I hope you continue to enjoy the process. Please take care not to overdo it and risk burning yourself out—we all want to see this story continue at its best. Thank you for your hard work and for giving us such an enjoyable read!