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author, after copying Jess Turner's skills, download all the memory and knowledge of Anna, the angel who fell from heaven and lost his grace, so the mc will be able to hear what the angels say, how to repel an angel, call a archangel to be able to trap him in the sacred fire. Anna's grace should probably already be with Uriel, but I have a doubt, if he downloads the grace from an angel, does he copy the grace or does he copy it and the system turns it into an original, as if the mc already had it?
The English belongs to the translator, but I wanted to say it for future ideas for the fic. There is the source of desire too, which can fulfill anyone's desire. Can your MC copy powers from magical objects too?
Author, don't forget he went to visit Jess Turner in Nebraska and copied his abilities: manipulation of reality, exorcism, biokinesis, conjuration, transmutation (he converted Castiel into a doll), supernatural concealment (no one could know where he was), clairsentience, telekinesis, teleportation. Basically until season 5, he will be the strongest, without Chuck and the archangels included. I don't remember if you could summon angels, but archangels can be vulnerable to the sacred oil, while you copy their abilities
Thank you author. What is the chapter schedule, 1 every 20 days?
Looks like shadow manipulation doesn't exist here
The only words MC knows are curses? It's difficult to read the novel like this, I have to skip at least 2 paragraphs because of the swearing, then I have to go back and read it again because it's not fluid narrative writing, it's as if someone were talking to you hurriedly without any connection, apart from the player mind skill that doesn't seem to work very well for this mc. Try re-reading what you've already written, that way you'll understand what can be improved👍🏻
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Why weren't the 2 old counselors also accused and taken to execution? If they did that, would the Daimiyao be mad?
Make him download a cat's abilities: night vision, keen sense, flexible spine, sensory perception of danger. Dog: smell×100, 40km/h run, stronger canines, high jump. Make him go to a zoo first and copy all the animals, especially gorillas that have a strength of more than 600kg to 1 or 2 tons (Silverback), tigers and jaguars with a bite force of at least 500kg, birds that can fly, bats to supernatural hearing like jm sonar, snakes for supernatural taste, hawk for 3km vision