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Author, it seems that you got carried away with the Chinese stories, unfortunately there will be people who will abandon your work just because you are letting the million-year-old MC who was a towering figure feel irritated with children and act like a young master that everyone hates . I don't know why everyone thinks the villains are better, since if he came to the real world, everyone would want him dead
Author, stop with these ridiculous fanciful descriptions of the characters, it makes me sick every time I read it. He should be more overpowered since he lived thousands of years and probably knew the most advanced technologies that he could normally recreate with just scrap metal like Tony Stark. Good story
chapter with a plot hole, if he was congratulating Mare on the construction like the anime, it means it was night and right after that he goes to the mirror to look for the Carne village which was already being attacked (in the anime, it was during the day) . If so, he spent more than 10+ hours just to find the village
I tried to search for the novel Divine banisher and I couldn't find it, does anyone know the original name?
Who will be your first partner? In the original I found Celeste a little boring as a woman, I understand that she was very worried due to other events, but after Orion became her husband, she almost didn't listen to his opinion unless he said the same thing twice thing
the mc looks like he's 14 or 15 the way he acts. Which world is he in?
Author, I understand that in this world all women want to get pregnant just like in the original, but I recommend that you don't do that until the end of the ff since your goal is to have obscene scenes and Orion would have to dedicate all his time to taking care of his women with babies and of course he wouldn't go after other women in the village. It wouldn't make sense for you to give him the power to control the pregnancy and still have him get someone pregnant.
Do you plan to give MC more powers on the day of the awakening ceremony? The vines are quite powerful, even more so in hordes. I suggest giving him a maximum pleasure skill to satisfy his women + infinite energy, since most of the novel will be focused on obscenity, it doesn't matter if you leave the MC mega operated