Froschmann
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The Frogman provides... sometimes
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Froschmann1hComentado por"Kill!" With a war cry they launched themselves into battle. Han Yan summoned the Kraken beast soul and rode it towards the crab. It effortlessly swam in a curve, the sea it's natural habitat.- Froschmann1hComentado por
What's up with that by the way? The "Kill!" trope in novels is so weird I swear
"Kill!" With a war cry they launched themselves into battle. Han Yan summoned the Kraken beast soul and rode it towards the crab. It effortlessly swam in a curve, the sea it's natural habitat. - Froschmann1hrespondió a DaoistuMpk8F
What country are you from? Your choice of words and Grammar is quite interesting lol
With a nod, Han Yan flew away as instructed, leaving Bian alone on the mountain's peak. With a sense of determination and anticipation, he summoned his super crystal armor and super dragonfly wings, taking off in the direction of Ning Yue. - Froschmann2hComentado por
That song sucks
After some days of rehearsal they nailed the song perfectly. Bian was impressed and satisfied with their learning speed and adaptability. They released their first song titled 'need to know.' - Froschmann3hComentado por"Then what's left to consider, date him, marry him have two kids, adopt a puppy buy a yacht." Lin Miru liked to live on the simple side of life.
- Froschmann4hrespondió a Shisui34Bian Manwei "I used the pen you gave me to write down the translation"
- Froschmann4hComentado por"Jing Jia got 998 because that's all he could get, Bian Manwei got 1000 because that was all there was to get."
- Froschmann4hComentado por"Impossible" he spat the coffee out of his mouth. He checked the translated version and was astonished, it usually took weeks and even months before a scroll like this one could get translated.
- Froschmann4hComentado porHe would leap and maneuver over some branches and he climbed higher and higher up the tree. 'Return to monkey' he thought as he made his way up. Nearly thirty minutes later he had arrived at the top of the tree.
- Froschmann1dComentado porAnxiously, Sakayanagi Arisu tapped her cane... in frustration.
- Froschmann2dComentado por
No, it was way too forced. Maybe the method wasn't, but your writing made it so. Just spend a bit more time at a crucial point like this. Some parts are more important than others, especially if you planned it for such a long time. This just seemed like a rushed and forced job, and you probably lost a lot of people/readers due to it.
But I don't think it was forced though. Each scene was reasonable. Malekith and Kurse getting freed from mind stone's effect because of the fall on the ground. Even him getting stabbed from behind when he was exhausted from stopping the ship. - Froschmann2dComentado por"Oh, Oh, she disappeared! She disappeared!" Pietro shouted excitedly as he watched Jane slip and disappear from the world.
- Froschmann2dComentado porAfter that Jerry went to his lab to to study more ways to make his new body stronger. Just yesterday, he had enhanced the healing factor's efficiency by 0.27%. It was a huge success.
- Froschmann2dComentado por"Ow, my back!", his back pain was at it again, since he had removed that si-fi sweat slim belt to bathe.
- Froschmann2dComentado por4. Genocide: To Prevent or To Enjoy?
- Froschmann2dComentado porAfter practicing Imago Magus, even his patron saint changed. The usual patron saint can only drive away the soul-eating monster, but when the silver thunderbird released lightning, the soul-eating monster that even real thunder and lightning could not kill died.