Jake_Aroling

Astonishing quality given the platform. The detail is very well done, and the way that the story progresses really does make you want to keep reading. Really good job! Keep up the good work!

The extremely dark exposition, poetic writing style, and overall high quality is awesome. The world you've created is highly interesting and the mechanics that Aram uses are some I haven't seen before. Great job, keep it up!

The character motivations are intriguing, the writing quality is better than average for Webnovel, and all the layers of backstory add up to a decent read. Good luck in the competition!

It's quite the intriguing storyline set in a classic angel-demon scenario. Writing quality is about par for Webnovel, so that isn't too much of an issue here. Happy writing!

There are few grammatical mistakes, which is a definite plus on Webnovel. The sudden twist at the end leaves the reader hanging, ready for the next chapter. Can't wait!

This was sort of a cool read. I was quite interested by how it progressed from the unique exposition with a parasite as a main character. Overall, really great idea for a LitRPG and I would recommend.

Rather difficult to read given the typographical errors present. When you picture the scene, the story comes to life and you can really get into it. I hope to see this story continue and improve as it goes along!

Really interesting story, great characters, and most importantly astounding writing quality for Webnovel. Lots of creative ideas to move the plot along. Congrats, this is a fun read!

WOW! WHAT AN AMAZING BOOK! THIS IS ABSOLUTELY THE BEST THING I'VE EVER READ (except for the first book, Larry Bottem and the Sorcerer's Scone). SO GOOOOOOOOOOD!

After reading the first few chapters, I'm very interested by the possibilities that such a plot could bring up. I would highly recommend this seeing as it has a unique premise that should refresh readers of other system/cultivation stories.