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Kein did not understand the definition of "death" in this sentence. The system offers a fairly instant way to become an above-average professional athlete. If he refuses, then he is "death". That is, he will get nothing even if he struggles. Kein has the skills but it's not enough to be the best. So the system says Kein will 'die' because the system knows what is best for him. And rejection in any form will derail his career as a professional athlete. Maybe you forgot that the main theme of this novel is slice of life. Then, real death might not exist. I hope this answers your disappointment. I'm very grateful for your criticism.[img=recommend]
Author here![img=proud][img=proud] I really can't believe the time has come to write a novel, with a 'system' and 'slice of life' theme. This is the first time I've ventured into a system novel, as I had no confidence in my abilities before. I hope you will enjoy this novel and don't hesitate to give me any suggestions or criticism if necessary. I would really appreciate your judgement. Thanks and Enjoy it! [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Author Review Here! Decided to write a fantasy novel about Gods and Demons. It tells the story of a Goddess who gets lost in a forest to seek help in seizing the throne of the Gods from the Demon King. There she meets a former soldier, Xavier, forcing him to become her aide and bring down the Demon King's dynasty in Heaven. I believe it will be very complicated but fun for me. 😀
Author here. First, Calamity Order is my first global novel. I don't expect much on the results but consistently will keep going. Then the novel generally tells about the adventures of a young man who wants to see the world with both eyes on his own. Got a lot of inspiration from various movies, games, and anime. Hope you guys like it and don't hesitate to review
Baru chapter pertama udah nasib buruk aja 😓
Latar waktunya sangat tua sekali ya kak [img=recommend]