Hope u don’t give up on it again. Last one was pretty good from as far as I remember it was unique for sure

Just gonna warn regarding death mage it is very fd up and depressing 10/10 would not read start again it’s got most “dark” things u can think of and one of the worst things is he’s basically being continuously cycled. But yeah if u exclude all that it is a great book got a bit of everything mainly focussed on country building and mc getting op as fk.

This is good so far I have saved it for when u add more chspters

You have forgotten about time a lot of authors give up books cause of work/sleep schedules not giving them enough time to be productive. Part of why some have slower update rates shouldn’t really complain about that they probably put most their free time into writing it / researching and the quality doesn’t usually drop just less often uploads

Good so far

Read not written f**king autocorrect

By what I’ve written so far I believe full metal alchemist fits more and will improve them all round. Personally would like to see what u would do with fairtail but objectively full metal alchemist is the better choice how the f**k can they survive against some of the people in that guild they r way to weak especially if only 2 members

Lovecraft would be funny as f**k, yes I know you have already chosen just making a statement.

Liked the book so far hope u don’t end it here like most walking dead fanfics especially how h have so much potential leaving a few “dead” alive and he’s low key op, it does it state it but he’s got experience in worse and basically unlimited resources and time also why does it he go into “eden” and freeze time to prevent a few of those death’s/ prepare better

Just reminds me of book where ex demon becomes hero’s childhood friend

Looking forward to future chapters, ur spelling sucks but easy enough to guess what u mean, like what I’ve done with mc reminds me of that one resident evil fanfic where guy(who is basically emotionless ) goes to that world from the future

Good so far

Doing good so far have high expectations for this. And you have been updating regurely, hope you can keep it up and have a lot of chapters and jeep up word count / keep increasing.

Thanks for the chapter

Hi man(don't mean this in any offensive way would it better for me 2 say mate? Can't believe how an abbreviation of human can be offensive), I have enoyed your book alot just wished u researched konosuba b4 u started theese chapters as u got all background stuff wrong basically either that that this book is basically perfect and now that its done and read it a few time u learn t o accept it and treat this part as konosuba crossed into a rpg world. P.S. your cult stuff is basically correct.

Yeah nah, if u add momonga it would make writing it harder for u for after overlord and honestly it would be more interesting without him. At the end of the day when some people watch overlord do they watch it for the arrogant skeleton or everyone else. Also will you be doing that world before plot that would be interesting seeing the guild members interaction, which most want to see but never shows in the anime.

Would u purposely anger a strong af psychopath. Thats about the equivalent of how hed sees her at the start.

Is the 2 bottles strait or mixed or beer or wine if its anything but strait that is weak just last night had y bottles of beer within 3 hours and had not much of a reaction so far sure my reaction speed was slowed down a little last night.

Also starts off weak grows with host.... guess symbiots would be another good choice

Why not choose mercer bloodline gives potentially limitless potential and no tail weakness?