Platika_Netonora

Hello, are you going to update more chapters? There's no problem if the answer is no, but I'm worried about you, author. Everything okay?

This is crazy well written. The novel accurately captures the internal debates of someone with a lot of talent but fear of falling down a bad path, and shows us an incredible character development. One of the best reads I've had this year. I hope it continues with many more chapters.

An incredible story. The characters are presented as people and not strange, pragmatic and unfeeling constructions. And not only that, but they also act according to their age and evolve over time following different paths. In this area, I think it is very well done. The rest of the points are also very good (although you have to get used to seeing the protagonist suffer hahaha), although one of the things that bothers me the most is, in many cases, the character's lack of inaction. She does many things, but on certain occasions, more than stupid, I would say that she does not consider all the possibilities she has. But it's just a minor note, as I say... It's the best fanfic I've read in years, I never expected to find something so exciting again. Thanks for writing it ^^.

It's great. Having to recreate a person without making it pragmatic is a difficult task. Makes the character great. I love it.

Es una historia tan maravillosamente bien hecha que me he quedado sin palabras. No pierdes la cultura japonesa como hacen los chinos y añades unas ingeniosas y graciosas modificaciones a la personalidad de los personajes originales. He leído muchos fanfics de Naruto y debo decir que este es el primer puesto de mi lista. Simplemente sublime.

Debo admitir que me ha encantado leer esto. Había leído ya algunos fanfics de Naruto pero ninguno que profundizara tanto en los personajes "secundarios". Muchas gracias por haber hecho esta pedazo obra de arte.

Al principio del capítulo pone mangar en vez de manjar. Un saludo y gracias por la historia.