Deikon

This novel needs to be rewritten. There's hardly any background to other characters, and major assumptions are made about them.Main character's background actions and choices. It's pretty 2- dimensional, without much depth or npcs.

Another, I have to be a corrupt and ultra powerful mc. This trope is simply too familiar to me. evil this, this powerful that and also give me a stupid harem... It's just too....normal.

Author I loved your comments.I agree with you about raven.She's a very reserved woman and d*** dude.This is your story, you write it!!!

If you believe you are being led by the lord holy spirit, then drop this fan fiction. I have dropped many things because of my belief in the Lord. I agree with your heart, the heart he has given you!

genderbender. if i wanted to be a woman, i would have asked. mc gets fucked forever... Not just this incarnation. That would cause me to become a hellspawn across the multiverse.... I would have a way to destroy ROB.

i am really thankful for this fan fiction. I'm enjoying the story. I know there's been stories lately where the character gets dropped into Hydra, but this one really made sense. And i'm glad for how it's starting to expanding grow in hells kitchen

So, Mr. Graythorn, i decided to purchase this book on the patreon you provided. Thank you so much, and continue the good work.I really am looking forward to more of this story!

As an I t technician and troubleshooter, I disagree, if I can write my own language, write my own colonel, you're not breaking into my system, and you're not gonna understand how I break into yours

I really am appreciating this story and I went to your patreon, but I didn't know how to find it.I will, or you can point the way because I do want to read more of this much more!!

The story begins with too many assumptions and not enough explanations about how and why I do not recommend this novel.