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Type Specialist or Generalist? And if I did choose the former which type would it be.- lstreader2dComentado por
I'm confused, is her name Izanami or Izumi?
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Isn’t 5000 considered minor force-sensitivity, not enough to be a Jedi but enough to have some benefits, I think there was a dude in the Empire named Nova Stihl or something who was like this
Now what the fuck was that future-seeing. Am I force-sensitive? But that doesn't make sense. My father did a Midi-chlorians and I had 5000 which means I'm not force sensitive. Well, let's take a test when I get back. And maybe I got some news when I transmigrated, or I can just use force sense. - lstreader2dComentado por
They are in space his speed wouldn’t fall
My speed began falling. The missiles got closer. - lstreader7dComentado por
Cringe
"You're supposed to be the second in the entrance exam." Kazuki's eyes emitted a glow. "I guess you abandoned your morals and thought so highly of yourself just because you have a rather strong quirk." He added. "Stop thinking you're the main character, you're an extra, a mere villain for the protagonist to conquer." - lstreader9dComentado por
Why is she still talking like this?
"Why brought here?" , I asked Misty who was also with me here - lstreader15dComentado por
I think the author meant meters because he said telekinetic spell
Unfortunately, the woman was able to counter the spell, landing just a couple of years away on her feet. Both of them finally took out their wands, and two blasts of magic met each other in the middle, turning the fight into a battle of wills and magic. - lstreader20drespondió a Raptor2244
Ok. I exaggerated a little, but it is stated that Katashi has “average” amounts of chakra
He listed all possible things he remembered he could use to get chakra. This lack of chakra limits him... He can't fight Uchiha susanoo, juubi, or Madara or even kaguya without chakra. And at the very least, if they joined ninja war in the future against Madara he does not want to be cannon fodder and die a meaningless death and wants to protect both Haku and Zabuza. - lstreader26drespondió a nablethenoble
Chakra isn't really an end all be all though, I remember Kakashi had very little charka. Lee and Guy too barely use any. Sakura too is said to have a small amount of chakra due to her parents only being civilian born Genin instead of clan members, but she overcame it with incredible chakra control. With both Shou and Haku being Yuki clan members and training since a young age they should end up having quite large amounts, I mean there were plenty of incredibly powerful ninja who didn't have access to a Tailed Beast
He listed all possible things he remembered he could use to get chakra. This lack of chakra limits him... He can't fight Uchiha susanoo, juubi, or Madara or even kaguya without chakra. And at the very least, if they joined ninja war in the future against Madara he does not want to be cannon fodder and die a meaningless death and wants to protect both Haku and Zabuza. - lstreader1mthComentado por
I thought he had control over his haki and wouldn't accidentally use it like this
And its all due to Yoriichi because right this moment Yoriichi is unconscious using conqueror haki which knocks anyone unconscious who is daring to oppose or even trying to stop him - lstreader1mthComentado por
If this is like the anime, weren't the Kanto starters considered to be rare? I would imagine the more common pokemon would be Pikachu, Meowth, etc, especially in Kanto
Looking around it was common that multiple Pokemon were walking by people. While not everyone seems to be trainers, these pocket monsters are a sort of pet. Pokemon like Growlithe, the Three Kanto Starters, Vulpix and Eevee were the most common ones. - lstreader1mthComentado por
I think you mean anthropomorphic
Speaking of magic, I won't lie the aspects of my abilities really confused me to a capital T. First when using my owl form, I looked like an owl version of a harpy instead of aa actual owl, next was the ant form it transformed me into and anthroponomic bull ant. Then I remembered that it depends on me as the user to full transform or transform parts of my body. - lstreader1mthComentado por
Bad grammar, this must be a translation because the quote is: "Power comes in response to a need, not a desire"
'I HAVE WINGS AND TALONS!!' I thought to myself as I noticed there was a magic circle beneath me and I might have taken over that owl. 'Hm guess Son Goku was right power comes at a need to at a want.' I than flew out of there as far away from the bears as possible and landed on a nearby extremely tree. - lstreader1mthComentado por
3 Hours straight isn’t that long to work
I then stood up from my chair since my butt had fallen asleep, and it needed to be waken up. Though since I've been in my office here at A.I.M. HQ working for three hours straight I get why it fell asleep in the first place. - lstreader1mthPublicado por
Honestly, a really great idea for the fanfic, but its execution is terrible. Grammar is not good, possibly because it seems like it might be translated. Little to no dialogue, and they don't even add " " to show someone is speaking. They don't show Toji's thoughts for being reincarnated, ending up in the shinobi world, or anything else. He just trains and then works as a mercenary, nothing else interesting happens. He barely meets anyone or talks to anyone. Anyways, I gave a 2.4/5
- lstreader1mthPublicado por
Overall, a good story. I like the idea, it's unique from other pokemon fanfictions I've read in the past. It's quite early on in the story though, with the MC only being five as of Chap 40. My biggest issue is the writing style. The author writes in an overly flowery manner, and it's become quite annoying after a while, so I gave the writing quality only a 3 stars. Despite my dislike for the exaggerated writing style, there's few spelling mistakes and grammar issues that I've noticed.
- lstreader1mthrespondió a RoughSea
Unless I missed it, they didn't even mention learning Thunder Wave too
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You mean Staravia? Staraptors are 1.2 m
Through this period of training, Tailow's size had increased significantly. From its original height of about 0.3 meters, it had grown to about 0.5 meters, almost catching up to poorly developed Staraptors. - lstreader1mthrespondió a yellowjacket65
ascend*
In case something unexpected happens, the camp has orders to gather their equipment and descend to the 37th floor. - lstreader2mthComentado por
I'm not sure if this is because it's an AU, but there have been non-human chancellors before
Although the Senate isn't overtly racist, as they have all sorts of races populating its many seats, only humans have ever been elected Chancellor, which is why he was relying so heavily on his apprentice at the moment.