FishyShu
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I enjoy reading the novels and e books of this website. contact me if you want someone to correct your grammar or vocabulary!
2020-10-19 Se unióUnited States
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FishyShu5mthPublicado porHave to say the story was interesting but the bad English — grammar mistakes, and the bad writing quality in addition to that made me give this rating, really liked it. Author please try to improve your writing quality and make sure you don’t have any grammar mistakes in past chapters (didn’t finish the novel).
- FishyShu7mthComentado por'I really hope I won't have to call those guys for help...' He thought, his head slowly turning in a certain direction. His eyes narrowed at the distant horizon with contempt and anger.
- FishyShu8mthComentado por"I'm proud of you baby..." Lochras hugged his daughter and with a proud smile on his face.j
- FishyShu8mthComentado por*Bang*
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- FishyShu9mthComentado por[IMAGES]
- FishyShu9mthComentado por'Sigh... Maybe I can just ask Reddit... Eugh...' The thought of doing so disgusted him greatly. Redditor and Predator rhymed... Coincidence? Xander didn't think so.
- FishyShu10mthComentado porEste libro ha sido eliminado.
- FishyShu11mthComentado porThey all suddenly grinned and chuckled, turning to look at Bullet, who looked up in confusion. Mei smacked his head quickly "Hey! Eyeballs! We together, win! ALRIGHT!?" Bullet looked up and nodded, Mei rubbed her face on his metal wolf head, "THAT'S RIGHT! WE CAN'T LOSE! A HUNDREDS OF VICTORY! FOREVER! HAHAHAAH! ENDLESS TRIUMPHS! AHAHAHHAAH! GOD CANNOT LOSE! AHAQHAHBQCOVWBJQEJONV"
- FishyShu11mthComentado porAizawa looked at Bullet before saying "There's 10 months until the Entrance Exam. You'll have to get stronger quickly. Are you ready?" Bullet held the mask and nodded, his thin body was lean but a bit emaciated, however it packed a strange strength!
- FishyShu11mthComentado porBullet continued to wait for days, wondering when Kaina would come back. He didn't leave the area, scared that she wouldn't be able to find him.
- FishyShu11mthComentado porThe boy roared and held the knife with both hands, stabbing over and over, shouting "Villain! Villain! Villain!"
- FishyShu11mthComentado porPain flooded the boy's mind as he landed in a heap of trash, laying there as the rain fell on his face, washing away the blood.
- FishyShu11mthComentado porThe moon loomed high in the sky, sprinkling down his hazy light as a car stopped by an alleyway. A concealed woman got out of the car and looked around, splashing her heels in the puddles around them. She grabbed the boy from the backseat, much to his confusion before throwing him out into the alley without a word.
- FishyShu11mthComentado por"I don't know how you ended up killing that bear, but that doesn't take away from the fact that it was very dangerous! I'm aware that it's not easy for you to live alone, but I told you to count on my family for whatever you'll need. After all, I knew your father for more than ten years. Now that he sadly passed away, I must also take care of you as part of my family."
- FishyShu1yrComentado por
The emoji movie world plz, I love that movie
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- FishyShu1yrComentado porEnlightenment: Ordinary.