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Akhilles

Akhilles

Lv1
2020-10-05 Se unióIndia
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  • Akhilles
    Akhilles2yr
    respondió a PSE666

    Thanks for the review PSE666!

    Pantheon
    Fantasía · Akhilles
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  • Akhilles
    Akhilles2yr
    respondió a The_Celestial_King

    True enough. But this is about how the Gods manipulate people. I want to bring this information out in the open. Make it official. Because the real test is about to begin.

    "Hear this Maitho and hear it well. I hope it changes your mind," said Raiden, pausing and looking down with an expression that, for the first time, was devoid of any mirth. "Before you, I was the fourth member of the Celtic team."
    Pantheon
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  • Akhilles
    Akhilles2yr
    respondió a Blackpaint

    Thank you for your kind words!

    Pantheon
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  • Akhilles
    Akhilles2yr
    Publicado por

    I love how the story dives into the plot without wasting time. You have just enough information about each character before you are give the first twist. This is a simple story. But I think its simplicity works. You really don't need a lot of complexity in this one, since its main focus is on the characters and their drama. Keep up the good work and looking forward to future updates.

    NOW LICENSED UNDER POPINK
    Fantasía · Blackpaint
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  • Akhilles
    Akhilles2yr
    respondió a MackenzieNdiweni

    Thank you for the feedback! It means a lot :)

    Pantheon
    Fantasía · Akhilles
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  • Akhilles
    Akhilles2yr
    Publicado por

    I want you to succeed on this one, so all the best to you. I think you should try to focus on one character's point of view. But I love the fact that you are going with the mature theme. Great work :)

    Rise of the Mythical Creatures
    Fantasía · MackenzieNdiweni
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  • Akhilles
    Akhilles2yr
    Comentado por

    I think the story has great potential. Try to keep the focus on one character so that it does not skip between many points of view. Otherwise, keep up the good work!

    Ch 2 CHAPTER 2: Painted with blood
    Rise of the Mythical Creatures
    Fantasía · MackenzieNdiweni
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