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I have only read 9 chapters, I could not force myself to read any further. This review won't reflect the series as a whole, just what I could stomach. The translation quality is barely above machine translation level, making it very jarring to read Even if somehow you look past the translation, the framing of all the scenes is awful. Things happen with no explanation, perspectives shift out of nowhere, and it goes back and forth between present and past tense constantly. It is really hard to concentrate on the story. That leads to the final point, the story. The story is nothing special, pretty much just cookie-cutter cliche Chinese characters with as much depth as a speed bump. Cliches aren’t bad, and are often enjoyable, but not when cliches are literally every part of the story. Final statement: Don’t bother reading unless you have nothing better to do, and even then think twice.
Thanks for the catch, i mistyped it and grammarly didnt correct me because it was a real word.
Wouldnt this be unlikely, becaude wouldnt yuan become the leader as strongest=leader? Sects generally Arent Herditary like cla s
The grammar was pretty bad, and it made it very confusing for me. It seems interesting though.
Writing Quality: 3/5 The grammar needs a lot of work, it was barely readable. Story Development: 3/5 It was kind of all over the place, couldn't really tell what was going on half the time. Character Design: 4/5 The characters are fine, a bit hard to understand at times due to the grammar. World Background: 3/5 Generic from what I saw, didn't really get to see much.
*Uno Reverse* I only have one word for this novel, one word only. Are you curious about my one word too? Why so curious? Stop reading to find out my one word man. Omg, please stop being so curious. Curiosity will kill the cat, don't you know this. Fine, seeing how you're so desperate to know my one word. It's collection. What's collection? Obviously, it's adding this novel to your library fool.
The grammar and spelling is kind of all over the place, but I am guessing that is due to being new to English. It is difficult to learn English grammar, but using something like Grammarly or just Google docs can greatly help in that department. Otherwise the story is pretty generic, Orphan girl is bullied by the rich popular person. There hasn't been much development so far.